Brain Science for Writers Roundup 8/3/15
Livia's Pick: How to Extract a Confession…Ethically
Livia's Pick: The Writing Assignment That Changes Lives. HT Passive Guy.
Why screams are so scary. Good reminder about the dramatic effect of a scream, even if it's in print.
Active Duty Army Suicide Attempts Analyzed
There are four kinds of drunken personality (among students, at least)
What is the correct way to talk about autism? There isn't one
The Psychological Cost of Being a Maverick
The Long-Lasting Effects of Nazi Indoctrination
Does the Millennial know that tattoo might be a business faux pas? Some amusing tattoo stereotypes described here.
When Doctors Advise “Wait and See,” Worries Can Be Crippling
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Help me solve the mystery of the noontime philanthropist. (And win an ARC)
EDITED TO ADD: Ack, I showed this to husband and turns out I totally
forgot the part about angel dogs. (Think about it, if you've read Midnight Thief). Now
added below.
Back when I started writing Midnight Thief, my Mischievous But Secretly Supportive Husband (MBSSH) told me, “I’m writing a book too. It’s called Noontime Philanthropist. It will have angel dogs in it, and I’m totally going to hit the bestseller lists before you.”
He never ended up finishing (or starting) that novel, but as we get closer to launching the sequel Daughter of Dusk, I find myself thinking back on that intriguing title.
So today I turn the question over to you guys. What is Noontime Philanthropist about?
Just for fun, I’ll have Husband choose his favorite answer on 8/3, and I’ll send my last ARC of Daughter of Dusk to the winner.
Back when I started writing Midnight Thief, my Mischievous But Secretly Supportive Husband (MBSSH) told me, “I’m writing a book too. It’s called Noontime Philanthropist. It will have angel dogs in it, and I’m totally going to hit the bestseller lists before you.”
He never ended up finishing (or starting) that novel, but as we get closer to launching the sequel Daughter of Dusk, I find myself thinking back on that intriguing title.
So today I turn the question over to you guys. What is Noontime Philanthropist about?
Just for fun, I’ll have Husband choose his favorite answer on 8/3, and I’ll send my last ARC of Daughter of Dusk to the winner.
The official facebook thread for this discussion is here, though you can also comment on this post and I'll paste your answer into facebook for you.
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Brain Science for Writers Roundup 7/28/15
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Livia's Pick: What your smile says about where you’re from
Livia's Pick: Shining a light on why sensory metaphors are so popular
Everything Science Knows About Reading On Screens via Passive Guy
The experiences of adults with "selective mutism", in their own words
Is sexism the reason why so many heterosexual men are prejudiced towards gay men?
Companies are more successful when their employees feel young for their age
Free will inside the Nazi death camps
Does the Justice System Neglect Forgiveness?
Fixing the Problem of Liberal Bias in Social Psychology. A reminder that all researchers have their biases.
Black victims of violent crimes aren’t treated any better by the system than Black defendants …
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Brain Science for Writers 7/21/15
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Featured: The Problem of Artificial Willpower. Really interesting philosophical questions...
Featured: Being A Better Online Reader
Just two questions predict how well a pilot will handle an emergency. I wonder how much of the self reported scores is reflective of confidence vs. actual ability.
Saving For Retirement — As Simple As Counting in Days
The scaremongers were wrong: Metalheads from the 80s are thriving. Yeah, but I wonder how they do on hearing tests.
Brain wave study shows how different teaching methods affect reading development
Our jumpiness at nighttime is not just because it's dark. Keep time of day in mind as a tool for creating atmosphere.
I bought a house that is simply too big and now I have to hire a cleaning service… The humble brag is now an area of scientific inquiry.
What Your Pet Reveals about You
How Smart Should the President Be?
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Brain Science for Writers 7/14/15
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Brain science for writers is a roundup of neuroscience and psychology articles of interest to writers.
Top Pick: The Must-Have Effect: When an Upgrade is Available, People Tend to Break What They'd Like to Replace. I love how we make up stories to justify our behavior.
Fiction writers’ perspective-taking no better than other people’s. Interesting, though I'm holding out hope that there's a test out there that will find a difference :-)
Everyday Routines Make Life Feel More Meaningful
How racial stereotypes impact the way we communicate
Common medications sway moral judgment
How social anxiety manifests on Facebook
Solitary Confinement Is Cruel and Ineffective
Is It Time to Rethink Life-without-Parole Sentencing?
Pre-Crastination: The Opposite of Procrastination
Money Can Buy Happiness If You Spend It Wisely
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Brain science for writers is a roundup of neuroscience and psychology articles of interest to writers.
Top Pick: The Must-Have Effect: When an Upgrade is Available, People Tend to Break What They'd Like to Replace. I love how we make up stories to justify our behavior.
Fiction writers’ perspective-taking no better than other people’s. Interesting, though I'm holding out hope that there's a test out there that will find a difference :-)
Everyday Routines Make Life Feel More Meaningful
How racial stereotypes impact the way we communicate
Common medications sway moral judgment
How social anxiety manifests on Facebook
Solitary Confinement Is Cruel and Ineffective
Is It Time to Rethink Life-without-Parole Sentencing?
Pre-Crastination: The Opposite of Procrastination
Money Can Buy Happiness If You Spend It Wisely
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Brain Science for Writers 7/7/15
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Top: What personality features do heroes and psychopaths have in common? Goes off in a few different directions, but raises some interesting questions.
Top: How Other People Influence Our Experience of Reading
Your Facial Bone Structure Has a Big Influence on How People See You
Commenters exposed to prejudiced comments more likely to display prejudice themselves. So yeah, those crazy comment sections that you should never read? They're actually affecting you.
How baby names vary state to state
Health factors influence ex-prisoners’ chances of returning to jail
When these people look in the mirror they see a monster staring back. What it's like to have body dysmorphic disorder.
Higher Income is Related to Less Daily Sadness but Not More Daily Happiness
In Praise of (the Right Kind of) Praise
Do you think like an entrepeneur? (I got zero out of eight :-P)
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The Comprehensive Post of Romance Vibes and Attractive Things
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Daughter of Dusk, the sequel to my first novel Midnight Thief, launches in August (And you can get a free signed novella and other swag if you preorder!). So I thought I'd share some of the notes I made while revising the book.
Notes from my second round of beta readers for Daughter of Dusk came back with many people wanting more chemistry between Kyra and the love interest. So as I started revising, I needed to come up with ways to make the attraction show through.
As I went into my revision process, I did something that I've been doing since before I sold my first book, which was to analyze books which I thought did a good job at whatever I was trying to achieve, and breaking down how they did it. I've previously done similar analyses about conveying friendship and writing good death scenes.
For this analysis, I chose two slow burn romances that made me melt: the Cinder and Kai romance in Cinder by Marissa Meyer, and the Elisa and Hector romance in The Crown of Embers by Rae Carson (which all lovers of romantic stories should check out). I read through the each book and jotted down everything that made my stomach flutter, and I categorized them below.
So below is a monster list of all things attractive. I hope you find it useful! Tell me about your favorite romance arcs in the comment section. And if you check out Daughter of Dusk, let me know how I did!
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